My screenplay is currently being shopped, and I thought I’d share a scene from it with you, for your viewing pleasure. First, a short introduction:
“More Than Just a Brick in the Wall” is a comedic satire about a young singer learning to balance his career and personal life. Rob is kept on a grueling schedule of concerts, interviews, and appearances, while answering to his manager, Norm, the media, fans, and industry execs, while still trying to maintain relationships with his family, friends, and romantic interests.
(Please excuse the poor formatting! It doesn't transition well onto the blog posting.)
INT. HOTEL LOBBY - MORNING
Rob and Norm in a reception area of an upscale hotel. Rob, in his trademark suit, sits on a couch. Norm stands.
NORM
(on the phone)
My client needs at least 40%, that’s firm.
(pause) In that case we’re going to have to
go in a different direction. (pause)
Great. We’ll be there.
He hangs up.
NORM
(to Rob)
Fix your hair will you?
Rob brushes his hair with his fingers, not making it any better.
NORM
We booked River Plate Stadium. It’s the premier place to play in Argentina. The Stones, Police, Michael Jackson all played there. It –
Rob sends messages on his phone.
NORM
Will you put that away?
Rob puts the phone on the table.
NORM
As I was saying, we -
Rob’s phone beeps. Norm looks at the phone. Rob looks at Norm.
NORM
We leave to Buenos Aires on the 15th. Once we get there you’ll do a press conference.
Norm turns away and Rob takes the opportunity to check his text messages.
NORM
In Brazil you’ll do a shoot with one of their top super models. Her –
Turning around, Norm sees Rob with his phone.
NORM
You were playing with your -
ROB
No I wasn’t.
NORM
- phone again.
ROB
No I wasn’t.
Pause.
NORM
Is it that important?
ROB
I’m expecting someone.
NORM
Go ahead. I’ll wait.
Rob finishes sending the text message.
NORM
Can we carry on now?
Rob nods.
NORM
We’ve got an appearance at the Cinemax at noon, a photo shoot at two, be at the – are you listening?
ROB
(standing up, looking for someone)
No.
Across the lobby, “The Guys” enter.
NORM
Be at the plaza by 3:45 for a run through of the television special, and be at the stadium by 7 for the concert. If there’s anything you don’t like you should tell me now, that way I can make adjustments.
ROB
I don’t like your tie.
Rob tugs on Norm’s tie, and goes to meet The Guys, who are busy admiring the hotel. Norm follows.
© 2008 Rob Kajiwara.
All Rights Reserved.
May not be copied or reproduced without express written consent from KajiCore and Rob Kajiwara.
Rob and Norm in a reception area of an upscale hotel. Rob, in his trademark suit, sits on a couch. Norm stands.
(on the phone)
My client needs at least 40%, that’s firm.
(pause) In that case we’re going to have to
go in a different direction. (pause)
Great. We’ll be there.
He hangs up.
(to Rob)
Fix your hair will you?
Rob brushes his hair with his fingers, not making it any better.
We booked River Plate Stadium. It’s the premier place to play in Argentina. The Stones, Police, Michael Jackson all played there. It –
Rob sends messages on his phone.
Will you put that away?
Rob puts the phone on the table.
As I was saying, we -
Rob’s phone beeps. Norm looks at the phone. Rob looks at Norm.
We leave to Buenos Aires on the 15th. Once we get there you’ll do a press conference.
Norm turns away and Rob takes the opportunity to check his text messages.
In Brazil you’ll do a shoot with one of their top super models. Her –
Turning around, Norm sees Rob with his phone.
You were playing with your -
ROB
No I wasn’t.
NORM
- phone again.
ROB
No I wasn’t.
Pause.
Is it that important?
ROB
I’m expecting someone.
NORM
Go ahead. I’ll wait.
Rob finishes sending the text message.
Can we carry on now?
Rob nods.
We’ve got an appearance at the Cinemax at noon, a photo shoot at two, be at the – are you listening?
ROB
(standing up, looking for someone)
No.
Across the lobby, “The Guys” enter.
Be at the plaza by 3:45 for a run through of the television special, and be at the stadium by 7 for the concert. If there’s anything you don’t like you should tell me now, that way I can make adjustments.
ROB
I don’t like your tie.
Rob tugs on Norm’s tie, and goes to meet The Guys, who are busy admiring the hotel. Norm follows.
© 2008 Rob Kajiwara.
All Rights Reserved.
May not be copied or reproduced without express written consent from KajiCore and Rob Kajiwara.
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